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Haiku # 33 .

What  do  you now  see 

   A  night time  lunar  landing 

   Tranquility  Sea .




Inspired by Raul's photo contest ..

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2010 12:19:00 PM

Very pretty, sean. Thanks for all your lovely comments today. Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/14/2010 8:53:00 AM

good one, you are talented!!

Date: 1/6/2010 1:29:00 PM

I really like the serenity of this one. I like the opening question--unusual and interesting approach for a haiku. I hope to see more new poetry from you soon. Keep on sharing your talent. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/1/2010 12:39:00 PM

Serenity flows here..Charma

Brian Strand

Date: 12/21/2009 1:09:00 AM

Munster back onto top,obviously Heineken reaches parts that Magner does not Sean thank for your kind words today.Rgds Brian

David Byrne

Date: 12/18/2009 9:44:00 PM

Top marks!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/17/2009 9:35:00 PM

Nice image in this well written Haiku. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Sometimes I do take on an idea and write several poems around that idea. Thanks again. Caroline.

Brian Strand

Date: 12/15/2009 11:30:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Sean.Rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/8/2009 8:11:00 AM

As I said, this one is beautiful. Now, I'm sending a request. Christmas/Hannukah Footles, please! Happy Christmas and/or Hannukah. Lovingly, Dane (soup mail)

Katherine Stella

Date: 12/6/2009 8:08:00 AM

almost like mine lol but yours has colors in it lol great job on this one sean keep on rocking my friend happy holidays

Brian Strand

Date: 12/5/2009 12:52:00 AM

Sean,thanks for your always elcome comments and kind words today.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/3/2009 3:08:00 PM

Brilliant write, Sean! I'm sure you'll do well in Raul's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 1:27:00 AM

That's exactly what I saw! Actually I saw the man in the moon. good one Sean. lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 12/1/2009 3:13:00 AM

Sean thanks for your kind words & witty observations today.Rgds Brian

Donna Golden

Date: 11/30/2009 9:06:00 PM

Nice haiku, Sean! Love the second line! Hugs, Donna

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/29/2009 4:58:00 PM

awww I want a name. You only have 17 syllables..why not use the title for extra info...."Giant Leap for Mankind" ..although I shouldn't be helping the competition LOL BIG hugs Light & Love

Date: 11/29/2009 2:35:00 PM

What a peaceful view. Much said in just three lines. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/29/2009 12:59:00 PM

Beautiful! Smiling, Dane

Brian Strand

Date: 11/29/2009 9:37:00 AM

Yes Sean,the Greens are looking very solid.Hope they don't peak too soon before 2011.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/29/2009 8:27:00 AM

Great visual Haiku Sean and much good luck in Raul's contest.. I would not want to be Raul to have to judge as many entries as I have read so far as they are all so wonderful... this is a definite contender for winning ... my entry is Revelation.. happy Sunday filled with luv... blessings .. more luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "sweetheart"

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/28/2009 7:10:00 PM

Very Beautiful Sean ... NASA Would Even Be Proud (smile)... Lovely Picture ... MoonBee

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/28/2009 11:51:00 AM

nicely put, I thought it looked like the moon was sitting on the ocean, almost floating there.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2009 7:59:00 AM

Have a beautiful weekend and thank you for posting your awesome poetry here for us to read Sean. Wishing you the best should you enter the contest. Love,Carol

Wilfredo Derequito

Date: 11/28/2009 4:09:00 AM

Seems like you're going down memory lane again, Sean, it's been 40 years to be exact since the Apollo moon landing! Hey, mankind has already taken the next giant leap forward...in the direction of Mars this time. Wake up, buddy, you'll miss the flight! Fred

Brian Strand

Date: 11/28/2009 12:29:00 AM

Best wishes with this on Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and comments today.A chance to become World Champs this weekend ? A Battle of the Hemisphere Kings

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