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Haiku # 29 .

Crocus  takes  a  peek

Youletide  Holly  says  goodbye

Daffodils  hold  sway  .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2010 12:11:00 PM

I really like this one, Sean. Excellent haiku! see ya, andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 10/8/2009 6:48:00 AM

I know you've had these posted for a while but I'm just now getting around to reading lots of works. I like all of your Haikus! Thanks for making my morning. Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2009 4:00:00 AM

Beautifully written. Love the thoughts behind the pen. Sara

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/22/2009 12:28:00 PM

Very good haiku, and thank you for the commet it was pretty funny. Love Elizabeth

Tyler Martin

Date: 4/28/2009 1:04:00 AM

Nicely said and well written. Great job..Tyler

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/26/2009 3:52:00 PM

Hello Spring. Sean, crocus takes a peek...is that in South Florida? We had crocus there when I was a child. They are so beautiful. And the daffodils...Yes, so springy. Nice write. Thanks for you comment on my work. Always, Dane

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/16/2009 12:41:00 PM

A wonderful bouquet of words ... regards again

Donald Meikle

Date: 4/3/2009 11:45:00 AM

How does one soup mail? ( received one once)

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/8/2009 3:27:00 PM

Hello Sean, I love this Haiku, short, vivid and meaningful. Thank you for your honest commnet re: Michelle, My Li'l sister. Ernilando

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/17/2009 1:20:00 PM

This is a nice haiku Sean, I like the last line...Raul

Amy Swanson

Date: 2/9/2009 9:07:00 AM

Very pretty Sean! Nice picture of SPRING YAY :) and I am ready for it!! Love, Amy

Arany P.

Date: 2/9/2009 2:46:00 AM

my haiku #1 was not supposed to have a sequel!! it was just the first hug... hahaha... gos i can't stop laughing at your thought!! but thanks... so i'm getting better at HAIKU?? ~ Arany

Arany P.

Date: 2/5/2009 12:02:00 AM

thank you for your comments... but after cheching out your HAIKU... mine doesn't really seem that good!! you write so well... but i'll work on getting mine better... but your advice and comments mean a lot! ~ Arany

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/2/2009 7:58:00 AM

This lets me know that spring can't be that far behind. A warming feeling. Great form and clarity. Michael

Date: 2/1/2009 11:58:00 AM

Nice view. You paint a wonderful picture with your imagery here. I can't wait for spring and the flower to start peeking. Keep on writing. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/1/2009 10:45:00 AM

My first daffodil this am..Love this write Sean..yes, old man winter your time is almost up. BG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/1/2009 10:41:00 AM

Lovely images, Sean in perfect form. Love, The Queen

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/1/2009 9:38:00 AM

Its almost time to start my daily rounds through my gardens, expectantly watching the ground,,,eeessshhhh I cant wait. Laurie

Brian Strand

Date: 2/1/2009 7:05:00 AM

Possibly in the snow tonight they say for hereabouts Sean.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/1/2009 6:52:00 AM

Sean, you brought Spring to me today. Goodbye Holly! Hello beautiful, gorgeous, fragrant flowers! One of my favorite Spring haiku! Nicely done. Love, Shar

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/1/2009 4:30:00 AM

Just lovely Sean, great spring day haiku. Regards Déirdre.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/1/2009 4:04:00 AM

Oh, yay! Yes they will, and in my backyard, too - I cannot wait for the spring rainbow...lovely Sean, love, soupa doupa soupa troupa. lol