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Haiku # 29 .

Crocus takes a peek Youletide Holly says goodbye Daffodils hold sway .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/13/2010 12:11:00 PM
I really like this one, Sean. Excellent haiku! see ya, andrea
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Date: 10/8/2009 6:48:00 AM
I know you've had these posted for a while but I'm just now getting around to reading lots of works. I like all of your Haikus! Thanks for making my morning. Marty
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Date: 8/20/2009 4:00:00 AM
Beautifully written. Love the thoughts behind the pen. Sara
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Date: 5/22/2009 12:28:00 PM
Very good haiku, and thank you for the commet it was pretty funny. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 4/28/2009 1:04:00 AM
Nicely said and well written. Great job..Tyler
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Date: 4/26/2009 3:52:00 PM
Hello Spring. Sean, crocus takes a peek...is that in South Florida? We had crocus there when I was a child. They are so beautiful. And the daffodils...Yes, so springy. Nice write. Thanks for you comment on my work. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:41:00 PM
A wonderful bouquet of words ... regards again
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:45:00 AM
How does one soup mail? ( received one once)
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Date: 3/8/2009 3:27:00 PM
Hello Sean, I love this Haiku, short, vivid and meaningful. Thank you for your honest commnet re: Michelle, My Li'l sister. Ernilando
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:20:00 PM
This is a nice haiku Sean, I like the last line...Raul
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Date: 2/9/2009 9:07:00 AM
Very pretty Sean! Nice picture of SPRING YAY :) and I am ready for it!! Love, Amy
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Date: 2/9/2009 2:46:00 AM
my haiku #1 was not supposed to have a sequel!! it was just the first hug... hahaha... gos i can't stop laughing at your thought!! but thanks... so i'm getting better at HAIKU?? ~ Arany
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Date: 2/5/2009 12:02:00 AM
thank you for your comments... but after cheching out your HAIKU... mine doesn't really seem that good!! you write so well... but i'll work on getting mine better... but your advice and comments mean a lot! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/2/2009 7:58:00 AM
This lets me know that spring can't be that far behind. A warming feeling. Great form and clarity. Michael
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:58:00 AM
Nice view. You paint a wonderful picture with your imagery here. I can't wait for spring and the flower to start peeking. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/1/2009 10:45:00 AM
My first daffodil this am..Love this write Sean..yes, old man winter your time is almost up. BG
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Date: 2/1/2009 10:41:00 AM
Lovely images, Sean in perfect form. Love, The Queen
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Date: 2/1/2009 9:38:00 AM
Its almost time to start my daily rounds through my gardens, expectantly watching the ground,,,eeessshhhh I cant wait. Laurie
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Date: 2/1/2009 7:05:00 AM
Possibly in the snow tonight they say for hereabouts Sean.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/1/2009 6:52:00 AM
Sean, you brought Spring to me today. Goodbye Holly! Hello beautiful, gorgeous, fragrant flowers! One of my favorite Spring haiku! Nicely done. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/1/2009 4:30:00 AM
Just lovely Sean, great spring day haiku. Regards Déirdre.
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Date: 2/1/2009 4:04:00 AM
Oh, yay! Yes they will, and in my backyard, too - I cannot wait for the spring rainbow...lovely Sean, love, soupa doupa soupa troupa. lol
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