Haiku - 6

Winter time Starlings feed from Iron trees

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2012 12:30:00 AM

this is really good, Diana. I think it's got that juxtapositioned line they talk about haiku having!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2012 7:39:00 AM

Early morning reading to get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Diana. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall

Date: 2/24/2012 6:26:00 AM

Nicely done, I tend to prefer the classic syllable count, but this is very good, really enjoyed.

Deb Wilson

Date: 2/24/2012 2:56:00 AM

beautiful haiku~~love,Deb