Haiku # 32 .

Illumination ...

  Seeing  the  wood  from  the  trees .

  Caught  in  the  spotlight .



Inspired by Raul's picture ..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/2/2010 9:45:00 AM
Hey, this is pretty cool, Sean. Sorry I never saw it before. thanks for reading my poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/28/2009 7:12:00 PM
Nice ... Puts me in the mind of a Deer or those chimpmunks of Geico (smile)... Seriously, Good Write ... MoonBee
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Date: 11/24/2009 5:22:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 11/24/2009 2:21:00 PM
excellent Haiku..Charma
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Date: 11/20/2009 7:52:00 PM
AWESOME! A winner for sure, Sean. Lainie
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Date: 11/20/2009 12:10:00 AM
As Henri was ,and will be Sean.Sadly the only justice in any sport is on the scoresheet although football could take many a leaf from Rugby's book in the use of TV replays for major decisions/citing etc etc.Best wishes with this one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 11/19/2009 12:15:00 PM
Creative perspective on the picture. I really like the last line. Good luck in the contest. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 11/19/2009 11:15:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Sean. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2009 9:19:00 AM
Sounds more like hunting to me. Anyway a great Haiku as always. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 11/19/2009 4:44:00 AM
Hi Sean -just happened on your poem and am only now learning about haiku. It seems to me that yours is perfect in concept form and muse. I really like it. Thanks for the lesson! Robert
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