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Haiku # 32 .

Illumination ... Seeing the wood from the trees . Caught in the spotlight . Inspired by Raul's picture ..

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2010 9:45:00 AM

Hey, this is pretty cool, Sean. Sorry I never saw it before. thanks for reading my poem. LUv, Andrea

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/28/2009 7:12:00 PM

Nice ... Puts me in the mind of a Deer or those chimpmunks of Geico (smile)... Seriously, Good Write ... MoonBee

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/24/2009 5:22:00 PM

enjoyed reading today!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/24/2009 2:21:00 PM

excellent Haiku..Charma

Elaine George

Date: 11/20/2009 7:52:00 PM

AWESOME! A winner for sure, Sean. Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 11/20/2009 12:10:00 AM

As Henri was ,and will be Sean.Sadly the only justice in any sport is on the scoresheet although football could take many a leaf from Rugby's book in the use of TV replays for major decisions/citing etc etc.Best wishes with this one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Date: 11/19/2009 12:15:00 PM

Creative perspective on the picture. I really like the last line. Good luck in the contest. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/19/2009 11:15:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Sean. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/19/2009 9:19:00 AM

Sounds more like hunting to me. Anyway a great Haiku as always. God Bless Phyl

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/19/2009 4:44:00 AM

Hi Sean -just happened on your poem and am only now learning about haiku. It seems to me that yours is perfect in concept form and muse. I really like it. Thanks for the lesson! Robert