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Haiku 27

waking your scent lingers... I smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/2/2013 12:29:00 AM
love this romantic haiku, Phyl. yes, I'm doing good, thanks for asking. Hope you're having a great week and enjoying getting that sun tan x
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:29:00 PM
awe! now that is a smile, and loving way to haiku you loved ones scent......... a huge smile........ SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2013 10:35:00 PM
It is a charming poem. Maybe it is really a senryu - it is not really about nature. In any event - keep up the good work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/16/2013 9:54:00 AM
I smile with this so sweet and awesome haiku of yours my dear friend, Phyllis. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope you're doing well now. Have a blessed weekend! God bless you and your love ones! love lots & big big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/15/2013 11:11:00 AM
love this beauty, Phyll. Sorry to hear the flu is still affecting you - hope you feel much better soon x
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Date: 6/14/2013 9:31:00 AM
A true haiku in meaning and shortness of expression
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:43:00 AM
- Just beautiful, Phyllis !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:07:00 AM
ohhh yes, this is GOOD. (get WELL for once and for all, Phyllis!!)
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