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Haiku 08-16-20

leaves are withering in painted hues of orange - a song bird whistles ___________________ August 16, 2020 Poetry/Haiku/08/16/20 Copyright Protected, 08-1316-911-16 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted into the Premier contest, Hi-Ku(4) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 12/29/20 Second Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2020 11:46:00 AM

A very well deserved placement, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2020 2:39:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much _Constance

John Watt

Date: 12/29/2020 10:03:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Constance. Makes me want to go take a walk in a forest. Congrats ~ John

Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2020 7:09:00 AM

John, thank for the congrats and the compliment on my poem, just close your eyes and you are there _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2020 3:26:00 PM

absolutely gorgeous Constance, many congrats on your win and wishing you a happy new year:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2020 7:11:00 AM

Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congrats and happy new year to you also _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/29/2020 8:36:00 AM

Beautifully penned; helps me to think back to autumn.

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2020 10:09:00 AM

Caren, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2020 12:08:00 PM

I think he will love this one. I was sure he would like my last one, but he didn't. One just never knows!!! I sure like this one of yours.

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2020 5:00:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for that lovely comment, I hope Brian likes it too _Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2020 9:33:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. A brave bird that whistles when the leaves are saying winter is right around the corner. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2020 11:47:00 AM

Sara, thanks for the compliment on my haiku, appreciate _Constance

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/28/2020 5:54:00 AM

I can never write a haiku like yours. Concise and to the point. ~~

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2020 11:48:00 AM

Victor, thanks for the compliment, I bet you could with practice, think in the moment and look and listen to nature, the sounds and the visuals _Constance