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Haiku 07-02-15

lovely and tipsy blue moon dips into the sea falling dreamily ______________________________ July 2, 2015 Poetry/haiku/07/02/15 Copyright Protected, ID 07-1315-667-02 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the Premier contest, Hi-Ku (3) old or new sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 12/23/20 Fourth Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2020 10:33:00 AM

so dreamy, Constance. Belated congrats!

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2020 11:46:00 AM

Andrea, thanks so much for the congrats _Constance

Peter Dome

Date: 12/25/2020 1:42:00 PM

Short but sweet. wish I could write as well as this. hope you ate on te me d. best wishes. Pete.

Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2020 8:33:00 AM

Peter, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, yes, slowly on the mend _Constance

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/24/2020 1:12:00 PM

Lovely haiku Constance. love phyl

Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2020 1:17:00 PM

Phyllis, thank you for the lovely, Merry Christmas _Constance

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/24/2020 9:13:00 AM

Hi BW, This is so lovely and dreamy. Congratulations on your winning write. Merry Christmas Eve. PS, I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me for P.O.T.D:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2020 1:08:00 PM

Alexis thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/23/2020 3:54:00 AM

Congratulations, Constance, on your win for this great visual haiku!! It truly urges me to close my eyes and imagine how sun dips into the sea, dreamily!!

Constance La France
Date: 12/23/2020 4:06:00 PM

Newton, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, appreicate _Constance

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/22/2020 7:59:00 AM

I could go for a view of the moon and the sea. Beautiful ink. My best to you in the contest, xomo

Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2020 10:47:00 AM

Maureen, thanks for the visit and compliment on my poem _Constance