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a thousand chirpings silent the reflecting pond . . . a crows loud shrill call _______________ May 14, 2015 Poetry/haiku/05-14-15 Copyright Protected, ID 05-1311-867-15 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the Premier contest, HI-KU(2) sponsor, Brian Strand Fourth Place

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Date: 12/24/2020 2:47:00 PM
Constance, This picturesque Haiku creates images which leave a lasting impression on the mind of the reader. Now for your kind and constructive comment on “Nowhere In Sight.” Sincere thanks for your review of this work which I truly value and for the time involved, I was my goal to pen a dream landscape, Happy Christmas to you and yours. Howard
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Date: 12/17/2020 4:00:00 PM
a gem of a poem Constance! many congrats :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/18/2020 7:37:00 AM
JAN, thanks for the compliment and congrats _Constance
Date: 12/17/2020 2:30:00 PM
Wow, it's almost as if the reflecting pond took the multitude of chirping and turned it into one loud crow call. Very clever perspective here. Congratulations on your win, Constance.
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Date: 12/18/2020 7:38:00 AM
Carol, thanks for the comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 12/17/2020 9:41:00 AM
Constance, you capture this moment in Nature beautifully. Lovely sensory imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/17/2020 9:45:00 AM
Susan, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Date: 12/17/2020 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations. This is a winner in any contest Constance.
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Date: 12/17/2020 9:46:00 AM
Caren, thanks for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
Date: 12/16/2020 3:17:00 PM
Wonderful, Constance. Congrats on the win. It's a banner week for you.
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Date: 12/17/2020 9:46:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and congrats _Constance
Date: 12/16/2020 11:30:00 AM
So charming and serene Constance. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings!
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Date: 12/17/2020 9:46:00 AM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance
Date: 12/15/2020 6:47:00 AM
Lovely description of this scene in nature, Constance. Janice
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Date: 12/15/2020 10:15:00 AM
Janice, thank you for visiting with the lovely _Constance
Date: 12/14/2020 3:47:00 PM
Love this!!! God bless you sweet lady
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Date: 12/14/2020 5:54:00 PM
Gina, thanks for the visit and the compliment _Constance
Date: 12/14/2020 12:10:00 PM
I can hear it! Love it :)
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Date: 12/14/2020 5:55:00 PM
Heidi, thanks so much, appreciate _Constance
Date: 12/14/2020 11:10:00 AM
Wonderful ku! I love all birds and love love love corvids. xomo
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Date: 12/14/2020 5:55:00 PM
Maureen, thank you for visiting and for the compliment _Constance
Date: 12/14/2020 11:04:00 AM
Hello Constance, i like the sound of the chiriping sound. i do not like the sound of the crows. they are too loud. Enjoy your day my frienx.
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Date: 12/15/2020 9:41:00 AM
Hello Constance, yes the crows do have a beauty all their own. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 12/14/2020 5:56:00 PM
Darlene, thanks for visiting, yes, those crows can be loud but I find they do have a beauty all their own _Constance
Date: 12/14/2020 9:15:00 AM
Feel like I’m there!
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Date: 12/14/2020 9:19:00 AM
Kim, thanks for your visit and I LOVE your comment _Constance

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