Haiku 9-21-2016 For Contest

Haiku 9/21/2016


distant eagles shriek
icy dawn stills the echo
feathered silence reigns



9/21/2016

submitted to – Traditional Haiku – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 6, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Marvellous tranquil beauty, well done, warm regards, Laura. #7
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September 27, 2016 at 2:42 PM
John, I love this scene you have captured! Going in my fave! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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September 26, 2016 at 3:21 PM
I could hear it and sense it! Congrats on placing in a contest actually judged on accurate ability and style, that's meaningful. I learned a lot reading Catie's blog ... CayCay
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September 26, 2016 at 10:34 AM
congrats John on your well deserved win! I love eagles :)-luloo
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September 26, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations John - great placement Regards, Mark
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September 26, 2016 at 10:18 AM
John congratulations on your win with this beautiful haiku
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September 26, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations, John! ...Fran
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September 26, 2016 at 8:47 AM
I love the contrast between noise and silence! Congratulations, John!
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