Haiku-8

sun, god of summer mother earth's retribution cool tears sate his rage 06/08/2017

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John Michaels

Date: 10/28/2017 5:28:00 AM

Great imagery with this one, James! Well done. Regards, John.

James Inman
Date: 10/28/2017 6:31:00 AM

Thank you John.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 7/5/2017 9:03:00 AM

I'm greatly enjoying this read especially after thunderstorms mercifully cooled us down in the night:) Amitiés

Funom Makama

Date: 7/4/2017 8:43:00 AM

Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..

James Inman
Date: 7/4/2017 9:33:00 AM

Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2017 12:31:00 AM

Love the imagery and metaphor. Awesome one, my friend. Happy July 4th!

James Inman
Date: 7/4/2017 1:28:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2017 8:24:00 AM

Hi James...I'm surprised that after 69 hits no one had the courage to comment! Would I be off the mark were I to assume that this' hot/cool' poem is referring to an unexpected summer storm and rainfall? ~ Regards // paul

James Inman
Date: 6/15/2017 8:39:00 AM

Absolutely correct Paul, perhaps I made it too vague. Thanks for the visit and the comment.