haiku 8

a lone flower sway - beneath a weeping willow basho dreams of spring

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/9/2025 3:12:00 AM

"basho dreams of spring" - The master of haiku is brought in elegantly. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/7/2025 8:36:00 PM

Now you make Bosho dream! cool take on spring. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2025 10:54:00 AM

This is one of the better ones. Glad I am seeing it today, Rick.

Rick Parise
Date: 4/6/2025 6:26:00 PM

Thankx Andrea.....Have a great evening

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2025 10:00:00 AM

- Congratulations on your spring haiku, Rick :) -

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/6/2025 8:05:00 AM

Back with big congratulations Rick! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/6/2025 7:05:00 AM

Rick, nicely done, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/31/2025 5:07:00 PM

Nice Rick. Love the nod to the master. :)

Tom Woody

Date: 3/31/2025 1:17:00 PM

What? Did I miss the first seven? Dangit

Rick Parise
Date: 3/31/2025 1:27:00 PM

More to come Sir......:)