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Haiku 8 - Pier Sentinel

aqua water swirls salt sprayed air licks dry sea oats quick pelican gulps Copyright, September 18, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/28/2014 7:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Faye

David Mohn

Date: 9/28/2014 10:38:00 AM

So dense in imagery Faye...congrats on this skillful beauty

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/28/2014 1:25:00 AM

:) each word a beautiful imagery..:) congrats!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/27/2014 11:58:00 PM

Amazing haiku Faye! Congrats on top win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:49:00 PM

oh, this one is pretty cool!! Congrats again to you.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/27/2014 7:26:00 PM

Faye, congratulations on 1st place for your outstanding Haiku! Loved the imagery. Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 5:35:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR First Place WIN!!!! A well deserved win.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 5:33:00 PM

What an excellent haiku!!!!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 9/27/2014 5:32:00 PM

Congrats :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 4:54:00 PM

beautiful haiku many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/27/2014 4:51:00 PM

just laughing at what andrea said below, 'flip' I did! this was probably the most technically correct of them all, but the good thing is that you managed to avoid the flat dullness that imbues so much technically correct haiku, and instead you wrote something colourful, lively and interesting! congrats on your 1st place win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2014 12:27:00 PM

- Beautiful haiku,Faye - Good luck in the contest - Have a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2014 1:48:00 AM

Awesome picture of the pelicans gulping , Faye. Good luck.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2014 10:37:00 PM

OH YES< Charlotte will flip for THIS!!