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Haiku 8 - Pier Sentinel

aqua water swirls
salt sprayed air licks dry sea oats
quick pelican gulps
Copyright, September 18, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/28/2014 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Faye
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Date: 9/28/2014 10:38:00 AM
So dense in imagery Faye...congrats on this skillful beauty
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Date: 9/28/2014 1:25:00 AM
:) each word a beautiful imagery..:) congrats!
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Date: 9/27/2014 11:58:00 PM
Amazing haiku Faye! Congrats on top win!
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:49:00 PM
oh, this one is pretty cool!! Congrats again to you.
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:26:00 PM
Faye, congratulations on 1st place for your outstanding Haiku! Loved the imagery. Sandra
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:35:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR First Place WIN!!!! A well deserved win.
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:33:00 PM
What an excellent haiku!!!!
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:32:00 PM
Congrats :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 4:54:00 PM
beautiful haiku many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/27/2014 4:51:00 PM
just laughing at what andrea said below, 'flip' I did! this was probably the most technically correct of them all, but the good thing is that you managed to avoid the flat dullness that imbues so much technically correct haiku, and instead you wrote something colourful, lively and interesting! congrats on your 1st place win :)
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Date: 9/19/2014 12:27:00 PM
- Beautiful haiku,Faye - Good luck in the contest - Have a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2014 1:48:00 AM
Awesome picture of the pelicans gulping , Faye. Good luck.
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:37:00 PM
OH YES< Charlotte will flip for THIS!!
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