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Haiku

Once shimmering and brimming People drew out and quenched their thirst Now reduced to barren hollow .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/10/2017 11:15:00 PM
A very good senryu, I enjoyed it a lot!
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Date: 4/9/2017 7:57:00 PM
your poems are thoughtful and tell a great story. I enjoy them very much. thanks.
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 4/11/2017 8:27:00 AM
I'm grateful to you for having taken the trouble to read!.

Book: Shattered Sighs