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Chill steadily wearing out Plants wanting deep breath await spring Outburst of colour and scent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/18/2017 3:33:00 AM
Great imagery in such a succinct piece! I like it!
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Date: 4/10/2017 8:02:00 PM
Finally Spring! Nice and welcome, Bawa! I think you will enjoy yourself on this sight!
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 4/11/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thank u for liking it.I enjoyed your post as well.
Date: 4/7/2017 5:13:00 PM
I love the personification in this. Welcome to poetrysoup!
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 4/19/2017 12:51:00 AM
Thank u ! For reviewing .kindly read my new additions.
Date: 4/7/2017 5:50:00 AM
A pleasure to read ... beads of beauty ...
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 4/11/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thank u!

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