Haiku

Gentle breeze whispers Russet leaves bathed in moonlight Rustle hushed reply
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Hind Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 10:16 AM
This is very beautiful,
Deo Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 7:50 PM
beautiful rustling! ANIL Deo
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 4:25 AM
I love the creativity in this lovely haiku Shane! 7 I am off to read the other two.; )
Mac Donald Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Beautifully done, Shane! :) Writing a Haiku is an art in itself, but this one is poetical genius. Best wishes, Mikki
Cooper Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Thank you Mikki, I like the simplistic beauty of this form of poetry, it is the essence of poetry I think. Love Your friend Shane xxxx
Gazbowski Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Beautifully written.
Manassian Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 11:35 AM
This is beautiful, Shane. You are very talented.
Gazbowski Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Beautiful three lines Shane.
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 6:50 AM
- Beautifully written ..... beautiful picture, Shane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 5:44 AM
Absolutely beautiful imagery and image Shane:-) hugs Jan xx
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