Haiku

Gentle breeze whispers Russet leaves bathed in moonlight Rustle hushed reply

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Date: 3/9/2023 10:16:00 AM

This is very beautiful,

Date: 3/28/2017 7:50:00 PM

beautiful rustling! ANIL Deo

Date: 6/18/2016 4:25:00 AM

I love the creativity in this lovely haiku Shane! 7 I am off to read the other two.; )

Date: 5/27/2016 5:18:00 PM

Beautifully done, Shane! :) Writing a Haiku is an art in itself, but this one is poetical genius. Best wishes, Mikki

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/27/2016 6:39:00 PM

Thank you Mikki, I like the simplistic beauty of this form of poetry, it is the essence of poetry I think. Love Your friend Shane xxxx

Date: 5/12/2016 1:22:00 PM

Beautifully written.

Date: 5/9/2016 11:35:00 AM

This is beautiful, Shane. You are very talented.

Date: 5/3/2016 6:57:00 AM

Beautiful three lines Shane.

Date: 5/3/2016 6:50:00 AM

- Beautifully written ..... beautiful picture, Shane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 5/3/2016 5:44:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful imagery and image Shane:-) hugs Jan xx