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HAIKU Peepers chirp love songs Looking for single misses, Blue Heron stands waiting.

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Date: 1/9/2018 4:55:00 PM
Deep one here!
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Oliver McKeithan
Date: 1/9/2018 5:56:00 PM
Especially for the heron:) Oliver
Date: 12/26/2017 11:42:00 PM
Well penned. But last line should have 5 syllables. Merry Christmas
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Oliver McKeithan
Date: 12/27/2017 6:33:00 PM
Hello Anisha, Thank you. Glad you liked the Haiku. Thank you for pointing out my error. It should end Heron stands watching. When I started Haiku I was wedded to the Japanese form. I have taken classes and read since that many writers have gotten away from the 5-7-5. Thanks again Oliver
Date: 1/11/2016 1:47:00 PM
EXCELLENT HAIKU, Oliver. Elaine
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Oliver McKeithan
Date: 1/11/2016 4:33:00 PM
Glad you liked it Elaine. Thanks Oliver
Date: 1/11/2016 5:04:00 AM
Love it!
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Oliver McKeithan
Date: 1/11/2016 4:33:00 PM
Glad you liked it Cona Thanks Oliver
Date: 12/19/2015 5:49:00 PM
awesome haiku **SKAT**
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Oliver McKeithan
Date: 12/19/2015 11:46:00 PM
Thank you Skat, glad you liked it. Oliver