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Spring Pond

                                peepers chirp love songs
                                looking for single misses
                                blue heron watches

Copyright © Oliver Mckeithan | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/26/2025 8:36:00 PM Very nice one, Oliver. Congrats in my contest Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 5/26/2025 8:37:00 PM Thanks Andrea. Very nice contest

J Hamilton Gist Date: 1/9/2018 4:55:00 PM Deep one here! Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 1/9/2018 5:56:00 PM Especially for the heron:) Oliver

Anisha Dutta Date: 12/26/2017 11:42:00 PM Well penned. But last line should have 5 syllables. Merry Christmas Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 12/27/2017 6:33:00 PM Hello Anisha, Thank you. Glad you liked the Haiku. Thank you for pointing out my error. It should end Heron stands watching. When I started Haiku I was wedded to the Japanese form. I have taken classes and read since that many writers have gotten away from the 5-7-5. Thanks again Oliver

Elaine George Date: 1/11/2016 1:47:00 PM EXCELLENT HAIKU, Oliver. Elaine Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 1/11/2016 4:33:00 PM Glad you liked it Elaine. Thanks Oliver

Cona Adams Date: 1/11/2016 5:04:00 AM Love it! Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 1/11/2016 4:33:00 PM Glad you liked it Cona Thanks Oliver

Skat A Date: 12/19/2015 5:49:00 PM awesome haiku **SKAT** Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 12/19/2015 11:46:00 PM Thank you Skat, glad you liked it. Oliver