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distant thunderstorm horizon is grumbling day lilly closes ©Donna Jones

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Date: 7/11/2013 7:22:00 AM
I am glad I came back to enjoy this flower. :-)
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Date: 7/5/2013 11:51:00 AM
Beautiful imagination worded nicely. A great picture drawn with little ink. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/3/2013 4:42:00 AM
This one is bound for Haiku Heaven... Where all good little haikus go... I love it... Jake
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Date: 6/26/2013 12:14:00 AM
love the haiku Donna ;}
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:15:00 AM
Day lily... what a fine description of the sun! Makes me think the sea is swallowing it whole. Sorry I haven't been very responsive lately... been busy at the stadium!
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Date: 6/20/2013 10:09:00 PM
this is great. LIke Harry says, a clever one.
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Date: 6/18/2013 3:59:00 PM
another warning of the impending storm, clever Haiku,,,like this
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Date: 6/19/2013 6:18:00 AM
Appreciate that Harry..:-)
Date: 6/17/2013 12:28:00 PM
yesss...your creative shift in the end works magic, donna... a striking 'ku so well done!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/17/2013 4:13:00 PM
Thank you a nette..
Date: 6/17/2013 10:25:00 AM
HI MD....I'm missing ya! :( Where you hiding???? I'm so proud of this. You've gotten this haiku thing down pat! I still can't get it right!!! Just coming to send my love your way!
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Date: 6/17/2013 4:01:00 PM
Hey you....thanks....I've been here! In my yard and garden and kitchen!!!!! And checking in on you from time to time....thanks for checking on me too...
Date: 6/17/2013 8:10:00 AM
Excellent Haiku, I admire people who get this style. I can't seem to get my head around it. Well done Donna.
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Date: 6/17/2013 3:57:00 PM
Hi Richard...don't really know if I do or not either...just all the time I have to write right now...I would rather read when I'm on here...is there such a thing as a one line poem?..that would really be something for me right now!...by the way thanks.....:-)
Date: 6/17/2013 6:02:00 AM
Nicely penned dear Donna.xoxo
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Donna Jones
Date: 6/17/2013 7:20:00 AM
Thank you ever so much...
Date: 6/16/2013 8:19:00 PM
This is such a natural write...it flowed so perfectly, one beat off the other, I just love the image you presented inside this poem my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening piece this evening, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/17/2013 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Russell...it popped into my wannabe haiku head while I was scrambling around securing the yard for a sudden storm last night. I laugh now at that phrase after that contest! I'll always be a wannabe but don't care! Haha.....I'll just keep on trying! Thanks for your support
Date: 6/16/2013 8:15:00 PM
Sweet Donna does it again!!! Love and hugs xoxox
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Date: 6/17/2013 7:33:00 AM
Oh hugs back Jack....thank you......
Date: 6/16/2013 3:57:00 PM
Oh how beautiful Donna! love,Deb
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:01:00 PM
Thanks so much...
Date: 6/16/2013 3:54:00 PM
Hide the petals, Mother Nature approaches. Excellent Haiku!
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Donna Jones
Date: 6/16/2013 7:01:00 PM
Drake you are always kind
Date: 6/16/2013 2:56:00 PM
- Summer thunderstorms .... nice written, Donna! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:03:00 PM
Very sweet Anne Lise ....thanks