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Haiku 4

my son's first picture -- a dust-covered rocker by the window

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/2/2012 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Debbie, i like the image,, very sad and alone though... always~PD
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Date: 8/26/2012 8:00:00 PM
This is nice and kind of sad.
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Date: 8/20/2012 9:02:00 PM
Love haiku ,,,, 2 is better ;}
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Date: 8/19/2012 3:19:00 PM
Wow, this one is deep my friend! I enjoyed it a lot! Great Work!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/19/2012 4:24:00 PM
it's not right yet [pout] I working on it!
Date: 8/19/2012 2:48:00 PM
Debbie oohh this one cuts deep...David
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