Haiku 41

sporadic chimes -
an invisible man
knocks at my door

humorousmysterynaturesummerwindhaiku

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Paul Callus

October 27, 2014 at 4:02 PM

Hello Mr Wind!! Do come in! ... clever write Timothy! Now ... open the back door....//paul

Timothy Hicks

October 30, 2014 at 1:37 AM

I believe you might be the only one that caught on to my true intention with this poem!! I'm so happy :D

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 22, 2014 at 8:18 AM

Make sure your invisible man is a regular visitor. Enjoyed it. love.

Timothy Hicks

October 22, 2014 at 11:12 AM

Duly noted... thanks for stopping by and checking out my work!

Richard Lamoureux

October 21, 2014 at 1:29 AM

Knock knock. Who's there? Invisi.. Invisi who? Last names Bility!

Timothy Hicks

October 22, 2014 at 11:12 AM

Clever.

Andrea Dietrich

October 14, 2014 at 11:23 PM

this is SO cool. Yep, it just might be the invisible man!!

Timothy Hicks

October 17, 2014 at 12:08 AM

Why thank you Andrea... hope this rather obscure haiku made sense in your mind. Lol...

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 14, 2014 at 3:00 PM

- I knock on your door ..... great haiku !!! - Nice to see you back, Timothy !!! - // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

October 14, 2014 at 3:34 PM

Good to be back, Anne Lise! Been away for over a year and haven't talked to any of my Soup Friends :/ Thanks for reading...

Eileen Manassian

October 14, 2014 at 8:27 AM

WOW!!!! Who cares if it is sporadic as long as he brings great offerings like this one! :)

Timothy Hicks

October 14, 2014 at 3:33 PM

Glad you liked! Have you ever had a sudden gust of wind hit your house in such a way that it sounded as if someone was knocking at your door? That was basically the thought process behind this one... :)

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