Haiku 41

sporadic chimes - an invisible man knocks at my door

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2014 4:02:00 PM

Hello Mr Wind!! Do come in! ... clever write Timothy! Now ... open the back door....//paul

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:37:00 AM

I believe you might be the only one that caught on to my true intention with this poem!! I'm so happy :D

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/22/2014 8:18:00 AM

Make sure your invisible man is a regular visitor. Enjoyed it. love.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/22/2014 11:12:00 AM

Duly noted... thanks for stopping by and checking out my work!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/21/2014 1:29:00 AM

Knock knock. Who's there? Invisi.. Invisi who? Last names Bility!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/22/2014 11:12:00 AM

Clever.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2014 11:23:00 PM

this is SO cool. Yep, it just might be the invisible man!!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/17/2014 12:08:00 AM

Why thank you Andrea... hope this rather obscure haiku made sense in your mind. Lol...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2014 3:00:00 PM

- I knock on your door ..... great haiku !!! - Nice to see you back, Timothy !!! - // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/14/2014 3:34:00 PM

Good to be back, Anne Lise! Been away for over a year and haven't talked to any of my Soup Friends :/ Thanks for reading...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/14/2014 8:27:00 AM

WOW!!!! Who cares if it is sporadic as long as he brings great offerings like this one! :)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/14/2014 3:33:00 PM

Glad you liked! Have you ever had a sudden gust of wind hit your house in such a way that it sounded as if someone was knocking at your door? That was basically the thought process behind this one... :)