Haiku 4-2-2018

Haiku 4/2/2018 a howling wind speaks with discordant voices swirling snowflakes John G. Lawless ©4/2/2018

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Winged Warrior

Date: 4/3/2018 9:27:00 PM

Very well crafted my friend...stay in the light...^WW^

John Lawless
Date: 4/11/2018 2:18:00 PM

...i try to stay in the light but still can't see my reflection in the mirror......too much coffee???

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/3/2018 12:45:00 PM

Striking - especially the "discordant voices" line - take care

John Lawless
Date: 4/11/2018 2:19:00 PM

Michelle, I hear more and more of those voices wherever I am. Thanks for stopping by to comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2018 2:58:00 PM

I like the imagery this evokes, JOhn. Thanks for seeing my poetry today.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/2/2018 10:49:00 AM

excellent, John, have a nice day Hugs Eve