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Haiku 38 - Clouds and Stones

Haiku 38 – Clouds and Stones
	
	
	cumulus clouds 
	softened shapes of river stones...
	a shared aesthetic
	

	
	For Barbara Gorelick’s contest, “Clouds.”

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/31/2013 9:07:00 AM Jack, a lovely winning poem... thanks for sharing and the wonderful comment this morning... Soup mail...Linda Login to Reply

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/29/2013 11:30:00 AM Congrats on your great winning work..Delightful work..Sara Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 8/29/2013 12:19:00 PM Thank you, Sara. I appreciate the comment... Jack

Danesh Morgan Date: 8/27/2013 7:00:00 PM Jack Congrats to you on your win. Morgan Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/27/2013 9:10:00 AM Terrific haiku Jack !! This would have #1 in a haiku contest!! Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 8/27/2013 9:15:00 AM Thanks, Carrie. I'm beginning to learn to save my best haiku... Jack

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/27/2013 12:43:00 AM Congratulations on your place on the winners list Jack xx Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 8/27/2013 8:09:00 AM Thank you, Mandy... jack

Barbara Gorelick Date: 8/26/2013 10:13:00 PM Jack, I loved your poem even though it wasn't in the requested form. Its a beaut! BG Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 8/26/2013 10:18:00 PM Thank you for the honor, Barbara. I replied on your blog that in the future I will give close attention to the instructions, although I'm generally know for doing otherwise... Jack

Skat A Date: 8/26/2013 8:32:00 PM Jack, it is an awesome win.... ~Love ~~SKAT Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 8/26/2013 10:01:00 PM Thank you, SKAT. It was very much a surprise, and an honor indeed... Jack

Painted Hunter Date: 4/15/2013 12:49:00 PM Nice haiku, Jack...shared aesthetic...opposite texture...ha Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 4/15/2013 1:24:00 PM You got it! A man with a good mental eye... Jack

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/15/2013 9:09:00 AM Good morning Jack, some finding imagery. dark and gloomy. enjoyed your haiku... Linda Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 4/15/2013 10:12:00 AM Good morning to you, Linda. Hmmm... I didn't think it was gloomy, although I'm glad you enjoyed it. Maybe it's just me this morning... Jack