First Breath

an infant's cry -- first breath of life exhaled 8/1/13

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2014 8:36:00 PM

Kim, this is very nice and touching in my book... My grandson, never got the chance to touch one single breath when he came into this world... Enjoyed.. Linda

Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2014 1:03:00 PM

I'm so sorry you had to go through that. I can't begin to imagine the sorrow you went through. Thanks for taking the time to read my work. Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2013 4:58:00 PM

Ahhh!!!Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it..Sara

Milton Toran

Date: 8/7/2013 7:52:00 AM

The beauty of childbirth. Makes a man appreciate the love of his life. More men should be in the delivery room! Nicely written!...Milt