Haiku 33

dripping garments
loosely hung on a limb -
two sets

lovepassionromancehaiku

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 9, 2020 at 10:31 PM

So suggestive. Fabulous.

Timothy Hicks

May 11, 2020 at 11:55 AM

Thanks. That's what I was going for!

Michael Ainsley

May 29, 2013 at 1:07 PM

With a twist I say when the last line brings it togeather, Nice twist Timothy! Be always as happy as your smile looks like you are. Good vibration.

Timothy Hicks

May 29, 2013 at 9:53 PM

Thanks Michael! I've been seeing your name quite a lot, but haven't checked out your page yet... that's going to change! Thanks for the kind words on my haiku... it's a fun mental game for me.