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Haiku 31

cracking ice cuts through the silence -- a leaf drifts

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Jeremy Martin

Date: 3/28/2013 12:28:00 PM

I agree with Andrea! You've got this form down pat.

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/20/2013 6:18:00 AM

Going back to read some of what I missed...I always love your haiku, Debbie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2013 7:01:00 PM

beautiful contrast!

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/28/2013 11:19:00 AM

beautiful Debbie, love this one..You are a 'poeticpedia' to me..thanks a lot for sharing...

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/28/2013 12:23:00 AM

ooooo!! Highness!! How wonderful!!I can feel the chill!! lol big hugs, love you bunches...Cap'n deb

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/27/2013 9:59:00 PM

Dropping by to pick up Haiku pointers. Nicely done Debbie.

Donna Jones

Date: 1/27/2013 7:12:00 PM

It is amazing the poetry nature provides when one is quite enough to hear. Beautiful.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/27/2013 6:17:00 PM

Crunch, crunch. Haven't heard that noise this winter yet. Thanks goodness. Love it, Debbie. Great Haiku!

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/27/2013 5:45:00 PM

Great penned Debbie :D - hug, yanny

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/27/2013 12:39:00 PM

Lovely write!