Haiku 30

held tight within the arms of the maker -- light escapes through cracks

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 1/22/2013 4:51:00 PM

i like the use of senses you employed in this haiku. Thanks for your comments.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2013 4:00:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Very creative thinking..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..The scene of peace was really not one of fear for I heard the animals which indicated that all was well..We did get rain that night..

Jacob Cra

Date: 1/3/2013 9:46:00 AM

love it!!! Keep it up Debbie, and thanks so much for entering Poetic Possibilities's winter haiku contest! I'll get back to you if you won or placed soon! Check back on the site poeticpossibilities.tk often for updates on prizes, dates, etc. and enter other contests! We just created a new freewrite contest I think you'd do very well in! :D