Haiku 3-30-2018

tears blur a feathered longing haunting sunset John G. Lawless ©3/30/2018

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Date: 4/2/2018 2:59:00 PM

really love the feathered longing line!

Date: 4/1/2018 11:52:00 AM

very emotive lines John:-) Happy Easter:-) hugs jan xx

Date: 3/30/2018 10:42:00 PM

Lovely emotive Haiku John :) xomo

John Lawless
Date: 3/31/2018 7:07:00 AM

thanks Maureen, have a happy saturday....

Date: 3/30/2018 10:01:00 PM

Nicely done, John... Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve

John Lawless
Date: 3/31/2018 7:07:00 AM

thanks Eve

Date: 3/30/2018 9:26:00 PM

John, you know I know very little about haiku but I get this one. Although, I am not certain I've ever seen a haunting sunset.

John Lawless
Date: 3/31/2018 7:06:00 AM

Daniel, twas not the sunset that was haunting but the specter of love's fleeting moments fading

Date: 3/30/2018 5:38:00 PM

John, your imagery has imbued breathtaking emotional beauty into your Haiku. Superb and sumptuous..

John Lawless
Date: 3/30/2018 7:31:00 PM

Thank you Susan, I appreciate your kind words and support