Haiku 2

Photo by Debbie Guzzi blue ribbons dangle below baskets of apples -- cinnamon breeze

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 3/22/2012 8:57:00 AM

Like cinnamon breeze. In regards to the haiku socieety, not the american society. I believe its a poet site similar to Soup. There defintion seems to fit what I am reading in frogpond. Thanks for signing the petition. We'll see if Soup can add the definition. Hugs, Cyndi

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/22/2012 10:23:00 AM

okies

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2012 11:13:00 AM

I looooooooooooove your haiku..and the picture........... :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2012 5:26:00 PM

I wish I'd seen the example of Joyce's (did you ever show it?). I need a really clear pattern. She simply took each of her four lines and placed them at the beginning of each new stanza. VEry simplistic but I could easily have handled that! Let me see one of your newer poems now.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2012 10:01:00 AM

nice breeze..pd

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 3/16/2012 7:13:00 AM

Very nice 3rd line here.Love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 8:19:00 PM

I love that cinnamon breeze line, Debs. So were you my little rabbit hiding in the tall grass?