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Haiku

beacon light reflects stones polished smooth by time- mysterious mist For the "What My Eyes See" contest...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara,on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:21:00 AM

Hello Barbara, Congratulations on your win hon, this is wonderful As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 3:46:00 PM

So good to see you at the top Barbara! Congratulations on your worthy poems second place honor.Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 12:22:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Barb. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 11:11:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku here!Congrats Barbara on your big win in this contest----kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2011 8:22:00 AM

That middle line is perfect !!! Just loved it, Barbara...congratulations!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:12:00 AM

I really like your second line for this :) Super congrats on your win for this wonderful haiku, Barbara :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 7:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:21:00 AM

Congrats BG on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/27/2011 3:09:00 AM

S mystic image. Lovely.many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:07:00 PM

Quite descriptive, Barbara. Glad to see you in this top spot. Congratulations.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/26/2011 9:32:00 PM

Simply lovely. Congratulations on your no. 2. L:ove, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 8:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine 2nd Place win in my contest, Barbara. Thanks for the support. Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/26/2011 7:58:00 AM

Different approach..Good luck with this creative work..Enjoyed..Sara

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/24/2011 5:36:00 PM

Barbara, this is a particularly lovely one...living on the coast as I do, I'm partial to scenes like you've described and see them often! Good luck with this, believe you'll do well with this:) Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and encouragement for the contest. Very appreciated! Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/24/2011 5:25:00 PM

Annalise should like this one as an entry to her contest. Well written as usual.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/24/2011 4:46:00 PM

timeless. jhl

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2011 1:16:00 PM

Beautifully you have captured the contest photo in these lines Barbara.A great entry into the contest---kashinath