Haiku






beacon light reflects

stones polished smooth by time-

mysterious mist



For the "What My Eyes See" contest...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 10:51 AM

Congratulations Barbara,on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 9:21 AM

Hello Barbara, Congratulations on your win hon, this is wonderful As Always, Shar

John Freeman

February 27, 2011 at 3:46 PM

So good to see you at the top Barbara! Congratulations on your worthy poems second place honor.Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor

February 27, 2011 at 12:22 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Barb. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

February 27, 2011 at 11:11 AM

Wonderful Haiku here!Congrats Barbara on your big win in this contest----kashinath

Carrie Richards

February 27, 2011 at 8:22 AM

That middle line is perfect !!! Just loved it, Barbara...congratulations!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 27, 2011 at 8:12 AM

I really like your second line for this :) Super congrats on your win for this wonderful haiku, Barbara :)

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2011 at 7:34 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 7:21 AM

Congrats BG on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..

Tahera Mannan

February 27, 2011 at 3:09 AM

S mystic image. Lovely.many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2011 at 11:07 PM

Quite descriptive, Barbara. Glad to see you in this top spot. Congratulations.

Joyce Johnson

February 26, 2011 at 9:32 PM

Simply lovely. Congratulations on your no. 2. L:ove, Joyce

Audrey Haick

February 26, 2011 at 8:38 PM

Congratulations on your very fine 2nd Place win in my contest, Barbara. Thanks for the support. Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

February 26, 2011 at 7:58 AM

Different approach..Good luck with this creative work..Enjoyed..Sara

Carol Fillmore

February 24, 2011 at 5:36 PM

Barbara, this is a particularly lovely one...living on the coast as I do, I'm partial to scenes like you've described and see them often! Good luck with this, believe you'll do well with this:) Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and encouragement for the contest. Very appreciated! Carol