Haiku 22

her nipples rose with the bite of his teeth-- a door opens

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Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 11/24/2012 10:38:00 AM

A great penned piece Debbie. And thank you once again for commenting on my peace poem. Sending smiles and hugs, Connie

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/24/2012 9:34:00 AM

WOW Debbie very good sensual write... And thank you so much for my placement in your latest contest.. hugs and more Michael

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/23/2012 7:22:00 PM

nice ;}

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 11/23/2012 6:57:00 PM

A lovely imagery to this piece. Thank you for your kind comments and May God Bless!

Erich Goller

Date: 11/23/2012 4:54:00 PM

well. that's a sensual expressed Haiku. thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Len Gasun

Date: 11/23/2012 4:51:00 PM

This is a very lovely haiku my dear Deb! I love it so much and it makes me smile this morning. A winner for sure! Thank you so much for sharing and my placement in your contest. I'm deeply happy and honored. Have a grace-filled day in sunshine! love and hugs, Leonora