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Haiku 2020- About His Flower

neighbour's hibiscus -unfurling in my tea-cup last yellow petal

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/1/2023 11:29:00 AM

Hi Charmaine, A lovely Haiku. Panagiota xx

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/7/2023 9:24:00 PM

I wish for you thousands of yellow petals, lovely haiku with atmosphere, Charmain.

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/9/2023 10:14:00 PM

This is beautiful Charma. It has been so long, I hope you have had nothing but peace on your end!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 12:27:00 PM

They will come back soon.... Well penned

James Peranteau

Date: 5/22/2021 9:06:00 PM

I wasn’t going to comment on this write up yours Charmaine because you didn’t use my favorite color Hibiscus! *winks It’s pink voooman! You nailed this Hiaku, it’s not all about syllables, it’s about telling a story Yet getting it done with 17 syllables of course...purrrrfect...much luv, james

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/13/2020 9:21:00 AM

They will bloom again...lovely CC

Paul Callus

Date: 11/10/2020 2:29:00 AM

A truly beautiful haiku, Charm! Looking forward to reading more like these! Warm regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2020 7:13:00 PM

so lovely, Charma. ? this is how haiku ought to be! (did you mean tea cup?)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2020 8:34:00 PM

Hehe.Thanks Dear Andrea..It had to be tea-cup not tea-cop..silly me.Thanks for pointing it out..LOl..heheh.??

Reza Raza

Date: 11/6/2020 10:47:00 AM

Splendid

James A.

Date: 10/26/2020 6:06:00 AM

I'll think about this one for a while. I picture a sad dreary morning, holding a warm cup and staring out a window. I hope your morning is brighter than your poem.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2020 8:35:00 PM

Thanks for reading James.Stay Safe

Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2020 1:50:00 AM

a gem of a poem Charma your excellent haiku poems are always a delight to read, into my faves:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2020 8:35:00 PM

Thanks so much sweet Jan.x

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/25/2020 10:49:00 PM

I am not too well, Charmaine, but as I woke up this morning, thinking about the soup, I thought of you. You were always a great poet. Pity you stopped. Your haiku is interesting as with mild weather in Malta all hibiscus seem to be in bloom. Hope to see more poems from you. ~~

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2020 6:09:00 AM

Hope you will get better Dear friend.I will pray for you.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/25/2020 5:49:00 PM

Hi Charmaine, You’ve penned a well written haiku with imagery that stands out. I could just picture the flower with one lonely petal! Well done. Have a good evening:-) Alexis

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/25/2020 5:29:00 AM

Beautifully done... a inspiration from your heart whispering soft and gentle ... love it. God bless you

Silent One

Date: 10/25/2020 5:08:00 AM

Lovely but sad imagery... I have so many petals in my garden still blooming..