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Haiku 20170404

highways change wild hills
March wildflowers burst out first --
Homes show tulips, jonquils
©A. Deo, 04042017

changecolordaffodilsflowerhistorysenryu

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Lisa Ricci

April 5, 2017 at 4:52 AM

Good Morning Anil. The format is in true from. You did excellent with the voice and tone. All stayed true. We readers can see the wildflowers. Well done

Anil Deo

April 5, 2017 at 12:51 PM

Thank you Lisa, dear Poetess. I enjoyed recalling the vivid colors of wildflowers. The order of garden flowers start with whites, yellows, pastels ... then get brighter as we see maturing of the hotter months. Seems to me WILDFLOWERS need to work faster - attract pollinators - before the heat kills their flowers. Hard to say all this in a haiku/senryu. So, your review is NOT TAKEN LIGHTLY, for its kindness & encouragement. God bless U; shalom. AD

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