Haiku 1a

ripples
on the mill pond:
dragonflies mate

lifehaiku

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/22/2019 3:14:00 PM

lovely picture - just wanted to say Hi to the queen of haiku : )

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/11/2019 9:51:00 PM

Such a wealth of vivid and vibrant imagery, Debbie, of a captured moment in time. A stunning haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

FJ Thomas

Date: 4/3/2018 5:01:00 PM

A wonderful haiku Debbie :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2017 11:48:00 AM

Very observant..Enjoyed reading your ku..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope you are okay..I notice you haven't posted one in awhile..Sara

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/29/2017 10:03:00 AM

mating dragonflies....means the future shall arise....musing without disguise....nice write ms guzzi....;)

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/29/2017 4:30:00 PM

That's if the rising fish doesn't eat them ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2017 7:39:00 PM

Romance at the mill pond!! Nice one. Thanks for the win in your contest, Debs. Long time, no see!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2017 7:25:00 PM

No picture is needed with your wonderful haiku Debbie:-) I have never tried the non traditional form, this is so so beautiful:-) hugs jan xx

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/15/2017 7:27:00 PM

Thanks, Jan - just don't think 5/7/5 just think LESS than 17 ;).

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/11/2017 5:22:00 AM

Ah, so peaceful and serene...sometimes we just need a decent Haiku to make our day. Well done.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/1/2017 8:24:00 AM

I remember those days, when I was a kid in the family pool. Love the image.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/19/2017 1:37:00 PM

Love the haiku :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/12/2017 9:39:00 AM

lovely painting, I miss going out and washing nature.

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/12/2017 4:11:00 PM

Thanks, Eve!

Charles Henderson

Date: 6/11/2017 10:47:00 PM

very nice Deb. Good to read you again. cgh

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/12/2017 4:10:00 PM

Thanks, Chas! ;)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/9/2017 9:18:00 AM

Yes! Very nice!

Haiku 1a

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