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Haiku 1 - Up Comes Dinner

Desperate to be thinner Down goes two fingers And up comes my dinner

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Date: 6/12/2017 2:21:00 PM
Having worked with kids with eating disorders it made me feel sad reading this Julia:-( hugs Jan xx
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Julia Romano
Date: 6/12/2017 3:08:00 PM
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Date: 6/11/2017 10:52:00 AM
Heh! It's ironic, smart, painful. Not quite a haiku or senryu, but close. And very witty and cleverly written. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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