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Haiku 1 - Warmth

inclement sunset
frozen tiny lake sparkles
cosy fire roaring


25 December 2020

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Michael Tor

Date: 8/10/2022 2:28:00 PM

Wonderful images created and warm feelings in a few words my friend. Thanks for taking me there...

Paul Callus

Date: 1/6/2021 2:14:00 PM

Three lovely images in one, Victor. Hope the new year is treating you well. Regards // paul

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/5/2021 4:46:00 PM

Victor I can promise you this would have been among the winners if you had not been gifted a pm. This is an absolutely beautiful moment in time just as I wanted!

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/5/2021 11:12:00 PM

Thank you. ~~

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2021 3:03:00 PM

a splendid haiku Victor :-) hugs jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 12/27/2020 2:30:00 PM

Love the feelings of warmth and the perfect imagery you create for us in this special piece Victor...

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/27/2020 5:53:00 AM

WoW!Victory, Your imagery is cosy and inviting. I enjoyed it very much. Well done.Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2020 6:43:00 PM

wonderful imagery, my friend! Soupmail

Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/26/2020 6:06:00 PM

A beautiful Haiku written perfectly, Victor :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/26/2020 12:53:00 AM

This is so lovelyl... beautifully described... Good luck in the contest...

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/25/2020 6:37:00 PM

A splendid haiku that is very appealng to the senses. You write haikus wonderfully well! Good luck in the contest. :)

Peter Dome

Date: 12/25/2020 1:50:00 PM

Wonderful. I always admire such clever writes. Great visuals. enjoyed well done. Pete.

Constance La France

Date: 12/25/2020 12:36:00 PM

Victor, this is very good in my opinion, you have the beautiful visual of a scene, then on the third line the turn, perfect, you should do more haiku _Constance

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/25/2020 12:17:00 PM

Hi my friend, so few words and such a poignant meaning. Hope you had a cozy happy, faithful Christmas Day and enjoy the rest of the festive season. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.