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Haiku 1

rows of tombstones unattended line the hill -- crows roost

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/20/2012 2:55:00 AM

I love this one ma..and thanks for your help through haiku..hugs Charma :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/17/2012 9:55:00 PM

A stark vision. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2012 4:09:00 PM

Deb about your comment. Whose husband WAS that handsome devil anyway? I sure wish I knew. hahaha

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/10/2012 12:23:00 PM

Fantastic picture drawn with haiku, loved and enjoyed, bl

Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2012 1:20:00 PM

Good one.Check your message at FB Debi.....kash

Nick Bagnall

Date: 2/9/2012 5:51:00 AM

Is that supposed to be Crows roost, that make much more sense, fits the images I'm expecting, if not you've totally lost me :(.....

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/9/2012 12:58:00 PM

LOL YES THanks! health issues cloudy an already cloudy brain!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/8/2012 6:36:00 PM

Beautiful, dark imagery I got from this. Quite nice and peaceful. Always, Laura

Fabiyas M V

Date: 2/8/2012 7:58:00 AM

Great thought nicely presented,Debbie.Thank you very much for placing me among your winners.Lovingly,Fabiyas M V

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2012 6:41:00 PM

a most interesting picture and I love the way it's worded. An unattended line!! Such a cool image.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2012 1:29:00 PM

Interesting work..Those tombstones just keep on saying and saying but not so the dead..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I finished my start on my work "Chilled Air"..Sara

Charles Henderson

Date: 2/7/2012 10:32:00 AM

Don't know why , I saw this and thought of boot hill. Good one-

Brian Strand

Date: 2/7/2012 9:38:00 AM

Thank you for the honour given to my poem in your latest contest.Rgds Brian

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 2/7/2012 8:17:00 AM

Like it!