Haiku 1-2-3

snow drifts down from heaven ice frozen in glaciers melts into the ocean sun calls back to vapor clouds inflate -- repeating 9.18.18 Contest: Haiku 1-2-3 or 3-2-1

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/10/2018 8:49:00 PM

Great string of Haiku, Jeese, congratulations on your win. <3

Charles Messina

Date: 10/9/2018 4:53:00 PM

Excellent poetry Jesse, I really enjoyed this string of new form haiku. Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2018 4:32:00 PM

Great string of haiku Jesse. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/9/2018 12:09:00 PM

Well done, Jesse. Congrats on your top win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2018 11:41:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jesse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/19/2018 10:54:00 PM

Beautifully composed painting a lovely winter scene. : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/19/2018 6:33:00 AM

Very clever, Jesse.