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Haiku 18 - Mirrored

Human tragedy, the color of hopeless mornings. Sadness is constant. • Sadness is constant, a landscape of fear and fire. Consummatum est.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2013 11:55:00 PM

enjoyed seeing this one as well, Creativity with the mirroring

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/3/2013 9:02:00 AM

It just seemed to be right, as things sometimes are. J

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2013 10:12:00 AM

Hello Jack, i'm impressed with the deep and sad imagery. the color of hopeless morning.. wow..wow..that line alone speaks for the entire haiku...xox~LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/2/2013 10:14:00 PM

I just read what I wrote earlier, and wondered why on earth I said what I said. Truth is that my dark comes and goes... and comes and goes. It winds up built into what I write, which is as it should be. J

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/2/2013 10:48:00 AM

Thanks. It's strange though that I seem to write dark pieces when I'm not the least bit dark personally. Oh well... J

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 3/1/2013 10:35:00 AM

Very impressive Haikus on a burning topic. Thanks for appreciating my Tanka Garden's Glamour, Jack. You are very kind. -Mohammad

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/1/2013 1:29:00 PM

And thanks for reading my poem. J