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its february
and trees have lost their white gowns ... 
                        wind whispers     too soon

the snow is melting
and the green grass is growing ... 
                      too soon    tweet the birds

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Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 2/15/2024 2:05:00 PM Very nice poem! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/15/2024 3:26:00 PM AA, thank you for the compliment, blessings, Constance

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/11/2024 8:45:00 PM Very good! Too soon! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/12/2024 4:12:00 AM Kim, thank you for the compliment, hugs, Constance

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 2/11/2024 1:24:00 PM Dear Constance, you present a bittersweet essence of early spring with stunning simplicity! The first image of barren trees, their "white gowns" lost, describes a melancholic yet hopeful picture. The whisper of the wind adds a layer of complexity, hinting at the fragility of winter's release. The second haiku brings joy but the birds' tweets echo the first's "too soon," suggesting a tension between nature's awakening and an unspoken winter You've beautifully created a great Haiku couplet. Blessings, - Daniel Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/12/2024 4:15:00 AM Daniel, thank you for the compliment, and comment. You write such beautiful comments that make me feel divine. They are like strokes of sunshine! Blessings, Constance