Haiku 15

her oven opens—
bits of fruit color the dough
as flour dusts her breasts



Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 1/8/2014 9:35:00 PM

THIS ONE! SIs, I want this one. I'd like to create a modern sonnet inspired by the sensuality of baking, food, spices, all of it, yes? May I? I know. I could have done something more difficult, more challenging... but this would be a balm to me...

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/12/2012 7:00:00 AM

Nice imagery penned by haiku. Thanks my friend, loved always, bl

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/11/2012 11:59:00 PM

I like this haiku ,,,, I posted four of them on nature ;} Yes Debbie,,, I would like you to send soup mail,, I don't know where I post for that ;}

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/10/2012 5:55:00 AM

OKAY! This one's hot! Got the fan on and still not enough! LOL Hugs, Jack xox

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/10/2012 5:23:00 AM

You sexy thang! Me Like! Hey, I know you'd want the nudge. Please read Joyce's blog ASAP. She's had a rough time! xox Dee

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/9/2012 8:09:00 PM

Perfect. ps....thank you Deb for my honored place in your Trinity contest. It cheered me very much

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/9/2012 7:58:00 PM

Baking for the xmas season already--only dust I see is the snow dust got nearly a foot today. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2012 3:57:00 PM

Interesting work..One must have been busy baking..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Richard Palmer

Date: 11/9/2012 3:53:00 PM

nice write Debbie

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/9/2012 2:17:00 PM

a great write. you painted a beautiful picture here. Thanks, Jancarl

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 11/9/2012 1:20:00 PM

Hey hey Debbie, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your Haiku, in the hope that you will read my latest Haiku, I liked your Haiku a lot. Hugs - Laila

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2012 12:51:00 PM

Woow...well done Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2012 12:28:00 PM

A writer of all, a master of none but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it as usual Debbie. Did you write this for SandyIvy's contest? I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 11/9/2012 12:25:00 PM

Hmmmm.....

Haiku 15

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