Haiku

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haiku just three lines easy as blueberry pie.... juxtaposition

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/30/2023 2:09:00 PM

Very clever, Sara. That is the challenge - a nifty juxtaposition in 3 lines that is reasonable, + not too far off the mark. Well written! Cheers Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/30/2023 3:58:00 PM

Why, thank you Brian. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 7/28/2023 4:39:00 AM

Each haiku is a juxtaposition of disperse thoughts. Well expressed dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/28/2023 6:12:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. Your visits add a nice treat. Sara