Haiku

a breeze in autumn billows through an aspen grove ~ winter approaches April 19, 2021 One Haiku Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Mark Koplin

Date: 4/22/2021 4:50:00 PM

Come on now it's just spring, lol. Great Haiku Jenna.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/22/2021 11:43:00 AM

Beautiful...

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2021 9:01:00 AM

Great imagery, Jenna,congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2021 8:34:00 AM

And probably that breeze is already somewhat cooler than usual; no wonder your thoughts quickly turn to winter's approach! ~ Congratulations on your podium finish, Jenna. ~ Regards // paul

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 4/21/2021 8:16:00 PM

And look at that beautiful aspen grove. Congratulations on your fine win, Jenna. Blessings.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/21/2021 4:30:00 PM

I adored this one jenna so glad to see it on the winner's list:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/19/2021 5:25:00 PM

Even though spring approaches in the Northern Hemisphere, this autumn haiku is nicely written.

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/21/2021 4:06:00 PM

Thank you for appreciating it, Robert.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/19/2021 10:25:00 AM

Autumn, my favourite season, I can feel the chill of winters approach, perfect image Jenna. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/21/2021 4:05:00 PM

Mine too, Tom. Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/19/2021 8:07:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Best for a win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/21/2021 4:05:00 PM

Thanks for your support, Victor.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2021 4:54:00 AM

simply stunning imagery jenna this is so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/21/2021 4:05:00 PM

Thank you a whole bunch, Jan.