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fluttering leaves sing a blue stream bubbling along . . ducks in tangled ferns _________________________ January 13, 2021 Poetry/haiku Copyright Protected, ID 01-1320-740-13 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Hi-Ku Place Promise (7) Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/15/2021 Third Place

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/21/2021 8:50:00 PM

I visualize it and I feel joyful.

Constance La France
Date: 1/22/2021 8:00:00 PM

Caren, thanks for the comment and the visit _Constance

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/15/2021 11:43:00 AM

A beautiful haiku Constance :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2021 7:25:00 AM

FJ, thank you so much for visiting with the beautiful _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 11:18:00 AM

- I can see them ... lovely written :) - Congratulations on your win, Constance :) - happy weekend and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2021 7:26:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the congratulations _Constance

Karen Croft

Date: 1/15/2021 2:11:00 AM

Congrats on your win. Very lovely haiku!

Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2021 7:26:00 AM

Karen, thanks so much for the lovely _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2021 4:52:00 PM

this is really great work. is it for the current contest? Should do very well, Dear Heart. Yes, wasn't that strange how they got my title wrong in the anthology? I am thinking you never got my little gift in your mail either. Wow, I wonder what happened with mail this christmas!!

Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2021 8:52:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for the visit and compliment on my poem, yes this is for Brian's current contest, yes, I found that strange too but I was still able to find it, wonderful write, no, I never received your mailing, but I am still getting Christmas cards delivered from the USA so maybe in time I will get it- Constance