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Haiku 12 - Birth of a Heart

born a waiting heart soft kisses at dawn's first light a doe lifts her head

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Date: 5/22/2017 2:29:00 PM
How adorably sweet this is.
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Date: 5/22/2017 9:09:00 AM
Love this image, Tim!
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Date: 5/21/2017 5:11:00 PM
How beautiful. And you could even say fawn to rhyme it with dawn!!
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Date: 5/20/2017 4:51:00 PM
Awww <3 Tim, this is beautiful :)
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Date: 5/20/2017 10:58:00 AM
made me think of motherhood - and nature - love and caring - safety
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Date: 5/20/2017 9:51:00 AM
A touching moment between doe and fawn. A tender Haiku, Tim.
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Date: 5/20/2017 9:06:00 AM
What a beautiful Haiku with which to start my day!:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/20/2017 8:49:00 AM
Very nice title & poem :)
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Date: 5/20/2017 8:37:00 AM
Wow, that IS a beautiful haiku.
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