Haiku 11

starlings roost under a false sky -- airport fries

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/16/2012 8:01:00 PM

I feel as tho I need to be in the learning disabled poetry class, Debs...I finally get IN A BIG WAY what u are trying to convey...shall I say DUH!!!?? OMW!....I get it..I get it! I will try another one this week...tanks tanks and again I say tanks!!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/14/2012 9:25:00 AM

My hubby and I were reading this at bfast and were thinking of a couple dif scenarios...is this lovers at an airport? We have lived by airports our entire life...very romantic!!! Hey, can I add u on FB? Check out my Halloween Haiku and see if u can improve it! :) gwendolen

Fabiyas M V

Date: 9/8/2012 11:21:00 PM

This is a beautiful haiku,Debbie.Also thanks for placing me among your winners.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2012 8:22:00 PM

HI DG.... stopping by to say HI ;-) to your poem,,, i don't know about the image,,, it kind of feels like a Texas in flames... enjoyed...pd