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Haiku 11 - Summer Drunkenness

bottles of champagne vintage, luxury, fragrant - summer party night

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Date: 1/26/2022 12:51:00 AM
Partying without 'ice on the rocks' has become something out of question here too...A beautiful haiku
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Date: 9/1/2021 3:01:00 AM
Well, for those who like alcoholic drink I guess that would be nice. I would like some plain lemonade. Thanks for your visit to my page. I appreciate your advice and concern. You might like to go back in there and read what I wrote on my work called "Depleted". Sara
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Date: 8/31/2021 7:08:00 AM
A Great Haiku, Victor, vivid imagery, and fine wizardry in the middle line, keep writing Haikus; it's a lot of fun.
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Date: 8/31/2021 2:06:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku as always Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:22:00 PM
Mmm... my glass is waiting for those bubbles, lovely haiku Victor, always enjoy a glass of bubbly... thank you xx
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Date: 8/30/2021 3:06:00 AM
- Too long a trip ... for a glass of champagne :) ... lovely haiku, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2021 8:01:00 PM
Wishing for an invitation!
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Date: 8/29/2021 3:40:00 PM
Your usual awesome imagery creates a vivid summer night party scene here, Victor. Cheers! :)
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Date: 8/29/2021 10:57:00 AM
Love the enhancement of the middle line! Cheers!
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Date: 8/29/2021 10:54:00 AM
to warm to be outside , but great for the champagne. Great Haiku
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Date: 8/29/2021 10:13:00 AM
I think that sounds fun. I'm not a drinker. But I imagine champagne tastes awesome, as I have had wine now
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Date: 8/29/2021 9:06:00 AM
The joys of summer, beautiful Haiku Victor… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 8/29/2021 9:01:00 AM
I only have it at weddings, love the bubbles lol. Tom
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Date: 8/29/2021 6:18:00 AM
Ah, that sounds inviting put out an extra glass for me , :)
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Date: 8/29/2021 5:35:00 AM
Party time. Enjoyed the light touch.
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Date: 8/29/2021 4:18:00 AM
Tantalising and enticing haiku, Victor:)
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Date: 8/29/2021 2:56:00 AM
Sounds lovely, we are all waiting for an invite….Delice
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