Haiku

sun interprets heat skin on sand awakens sea foam cools slumber 5/28/18

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/5/2018 8:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/5/2018 9:23:00 PM

Thank you Line

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 5:26:00 PM

nice images for summer, Mike. Congrats in the contest.

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/3/2018 6:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea xxoo

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/3/2018 1:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest. Enjoyed.

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/3/2018 10:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Susan xxoo

Warren Doll

Date: 6/2/2018 5:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win ,Mike Well deserved.

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/2/2018 7:29:00 PM

Thanks so much WD!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/2/2018 7:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/1/2018 10:02:00 AM

Ahh, so lovely, Mike! Janice

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/1/2018 10:07:00 AM

Thank you Janice !!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/29/2018 2:35:00 PM

Hello Mike, just by reading this poem I felt like i was on the beach for just a second. Have a nice day my friend.xxxx-oooo.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/29/2018 2:59:00 PM

I’m so glad Darlene, thank you for your kind words xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/29/2018 9:56:00 AM

I feel like I just woke up at the beach! Very nice Mike :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/29/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you Heidixxoo

Warren Doll

Date: 5/29/2018 9:15:00 AM

WoW-well done ,Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/29/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thanks Warren!!!!

Yazmin Malik

Date: 5/29/2018 6:55:00 AM

Awesome :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/29/2018 8:03:00 AM

Thank you Yazmin!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/28/2018 3:29:00 PM

The joy of being under the sun by the ocean--well crafted Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/28/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thanks much, Vijay!!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2018 3:23:00 PM

lovely imagery Mike I love poems relating to the sea:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/28/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thanks Jan xxoo