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Haiku--Hordes Emerge

hordes emerge from ground time for piercing mating call unique cicadas May 27, 2018, entered in Maureen McGreavy's Magicicada Contest

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 7:26:00 AM

This poem is interestingly cool~

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 7:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, JW! Janice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/28/2018 5:26:00 AM

And that is how it happens..I remember the sights and sounds just you have depicted..best for a win, Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/27/2018 11:33:00 PM

I know growing up in MS you are familiar with the cicada. Probably sit on the porch many a night listening to them go on and on. It's one of those sounds that can transport you through time. These were my thoughts after reading your haiku. Good stuff, Janice!!!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, Daniel. Haiku writing is hard for me! Janice

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/27/2018 9:07:00 PM

Good one, Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 7:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, Line! I don't write haiku often. When I do, I'm always wondering if it's a REAL haiku! Janice