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Haiku

Winter whale watching... gray clouds roll aloft the ship ...bruised foam splays the bow 5/4/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:14:00 PM

I saw down here I had soupmailed you and already I forgot why. haha. Anyway, back with my Congrats. Way to go!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2018 9:17:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/13/2018 1:05:00 AM

Congratulations Kim, what an great experience for you, they are magnificent creatures. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2018 9:17:00 PM

Yes, they are! Thanks, Tom!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2018 7:15:00 PM

vivid imagery Kim, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2018 8:25:00 PM

Thanks, Jan <3

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Kim, love the imagery it's fabulous... eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2018 3:39:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great 3rd place in the contest, Kim :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/11/2018 11:37:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Kim. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thank you, Line! <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2018 1:27:00 PM

very descriptive, Kim, I think he will really like this one. By the way, a soupmail for you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2018 1:51:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! Reply has been sent to your soupmail.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/6/2018 10:43:00 AM

So vivid - feels like I'm on board - like this!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2018 12:13:00 PM

Thanks so much, Michelle!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/5/2018 10:05:00 AM

Refreshing dearest, Kim! Great imagery!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2018 10:44:00 AM

Thanks, my friend!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/5/2018 7:40:00 AM

Fabulous imagery Kim! Can feel the spray :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2018 10:45:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/5/2018 2:09:00 AM

Lovely image Kim, that's something id love to do. Good luck. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2018 10:45:00 AM

Thanks, Tom! I’ve gone whale watching in Alaska...fantastic experience!

Charles Messina

Date: 5/4/2018 3:59:00 PM

We both had a whaley good idea on a haiku...lol Very nice...great imagery...best of luck...Charlie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2018 4:53:00 PM

Thanks so much, Charlie!