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When a trees flowers blossom, they are beautiful. But with trees, come bees.

Mimosa The flowers nectar Thirsty bees 4-29-2018 haiku 3-5-3-Poetry contest Sponsored by Mick Talbot

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/1/2018 8:36:00 PM

Beautiful!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/30/2018 7:01:00 PM

Charles, you have enchanted me with your stunning haiku. You deftly composed breathtaking imagery of the circle of life.. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Charles Messina
Date: 4/30/2018 7:29:00 PM

Hi Susan, there is no one more stunned than I, Just about 10 days ago, I had no idea what a haiku even was. (lol) Thank you so much for your truly wonderful comment. All the best....Charlie

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/29/2018 7:21:00 PM

Charlie, you say below that you are new to writing haiku - but this piece says otherwise, my friend! It shows a great grasp of haiku, written by a seasoned haiku poet! It has all the elements of a wonderful haiku! Best wishes in the contest! Pandita

Charles Messina
Date: 4/30/2018 6:20:00 AM

Wow, win or lose in the contest, I already feel like I've won with those kind words you've spoken. Thanks so much Pandita....Good luck as well. Thanks for reading....Charlie

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2018 4:32:00 PM

beautifully penned Charles:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina
Date: 4/30/2018 6:21:00 AM

Thank you Jan...:-) Charlie xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2018 1:17:00 PM

- Excellent haiku, Charles - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina
Date: 4/29/2018 1:27:00 PM

Hi Sunshine, a breathe of fresh-air. I wasn't sure if It was done correctly, I'm new to the world of haiku..lol Thank you for your lovely and kind words. Hugs // Charlie